Draft:Oren I, Emperor of Sundaria

Oren I
Oren I
Emperor
Emperor of Sundaria
Reign	4 January 2023 - present
Religion	Secular

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Remove the reference section altogether if it's not used. Could use more content all around, consider writing a substantial but not to lengthy history of this person's micronational career.

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Oren Manthorpe is an Anglo-Scottish micronationalist. He is currently the emperor of the Greater Sundarian Empire, having founded it in January 2023. However, despite the recent establishment of this nation, Oren has been interested in micronations since 2020, when he was given a book on the subject. His family, three relatives and two pets, are the only Sundarian citizens to date, but he is sending citizenship applications to cousins and friends.

Personal life

Outside of the micronational world, Oren is an eager historian, with a little interest in geography and science. Apart from researching ancient empires and dynasties, he also enjoys writing poetry and cycling.

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Oren I
Emperor

Emperor of Sundaria
Reign	4 January 2023 - present

Religion	Secular

Draft:Oren I, Emperor of Sundaria

Personal life

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