Draft:1999 invasion

Invasion of Wilton first school
Date	some time in 1999
Location	wilton first school, UK
Result	Sun victory, Eastern and Moon chiefdoms annexed
Belligerents
Chiefdom of the Sun	Eastern chiefdom Chiefdom of the Moon
Commanders and leaders
Nectombetec II	Olcut I Olcut II Olcut III Telecbo Djoser II Tupo
Strength
unknown	unknown

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The reviewer(s) who declined this submission will be listed in the page history. Last edited by Sultan Mohammod 21 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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The 1999 invasion was a conflict in the pre- dynastic period of Wilcsland. This conflict is the mark of the beginning of early dynastic period and ending the pre-dynastic one. Very little is known about this conflict.

Despite the low amount of information, we do know it began early into Nectombetec II's reign and probably began with an attack on Olcut I's chiefdom by Nectombetec. Olcut I soon after abdicated or got deposed (we don't know) and got replaced with Olcut II. Olcut II would then lead a successful defence of the chiefdoms and also invented a weapon which we have no information on, which became the main weapon used in the war.

After Olcut II abdicated, all hell broke loose as Djoser II abdicated and which caused Tupo and Olcut III to reign for like 2 months. Soon after both the Moon and Eastern Chiefdoms got conquered.

Mohammod I, a researcher of early Wilcslandian history, believes Nectombetec I might have fought along with Nectombetec II. He doesn't have any evidence for this, but he believes Nectomebetec II couldn't conquer so much without guidance from a wise stratigist.

Draft:1999 invasion

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