Talk:United Guernsey Micronational Organisation

Removing email and website from lead.

I removed the website and URL from the lead paragraph, moving the website URL to the infobox. Additionally, I removed the various initialisms for the organization, as they were redundant (the only variation being differences in punctuation). Additionally fixed dates (20 May 2023 rather than 20th May 2023).

I recommend taking a look at the focus of the history section. In reading the article I was left with a few questions: is the First War the same as the Founding Conflict? Information regarding the First War/Conflict might serve as its own paragraph. "The United Guernsey Micronations was founded on 20 May 2023 in response to the First War. This conflict..."

Additionally, the "Extra information" section might more appropriately be labeled as etymology, though I feel this section would be more appropriate as one, well-phrased sentence. RalphGrainger (talk) 15:51, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Thank You so much. I would honestly say that I rushed a bit, and didn’t check for errors. I thought nothing was wrong, but I assure you these errors will be fixed in the coming future. The Leafland Union (talk) 06:29, 29 June 2024 (UTC)

Happy to help. This is a wiki after all, so its a collaborative effort. I find myself referencing the MicroWiki:Manual of Style pretty frequently in my own articles. RalphGrainger (talk) 16:21, 29 June 2024 (UTC)