Talk:Kingdom of Orzofelujia
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This article is graded 11/33 according to The Doan Standard.
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NPOV
This article uses many first person pronouns such as I, me, we, etc. This needs to be changed to third person to reflect the encycolpedic tone. -- President Devin Purcell Penn Federal Republic 16:55, 27 September 2022 (UTC)
I’m working on it, but what am I going to change "As I referenced before" to? I know it sounds dumb, but I’ve experimented with the 3rd person pronouns with that sentence and I can’t see how to change it.. but thanks for telling me and again I’m working on it now. Thanks Ilovethehitgameomori (talk) 09:42, 29 September 2022 (UTC)
@Ilovethehitgameomori: I'll help fix it for you. -- President Devin Purcell Penn Federal Republic 12:17, 29 September 2022 (UTC)