Draft talk:The Circle of Belmoor

Draft submission

I just reviewed your article. While I feel there could be more detail, the writing thus far is of a higher quality than most drafts and I feel like the volume of detail will come as Belmoor develops. There are a few small errors: dates on MicroWiki should be formated as 5 September 2020 rather than September 5, 2020. I'd also argue that words like "ruling council" and "dual electorate" should not be bolded.

Otherwise, the article is in pretty good shape for the first day of writing! Feel free to reach out to me any time at my talk page or on discord. RalphGraingertalk 03:39, 2 July 2024 (UTC)