Draft:The Alwati-Norwegian border

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The Alwati-Norwegian border is the sort of border between the Alwatan and Norway. The border is not very secure, especially during the Caliphate days. This resulted in constant Skirmishes by "Barbarians", wishing either to conquer the Caliphate or to overthrow it. To combat the weakness, Mohammod I has ordered guards to defend the border incase attack.

Fort Notzeguza

Fort Notzeguza is a fort along the Border, with it's whole purpose to keep out unwanted outsiders. The fort is a tree that had planks and sticks used to make a fortification incase enemy attacks. The fort is relatively new and hasn't had time to be used yet. Because it was built in 9th April it barely avoided being able to be used during the Great Skirmish period.

No water?

The Alwatan is, you guessed it by the headline, Landlocked. Due to this, the Alwatan is unable to assert their influence outside Jessheim, or worse yet, isolated from the rest of the Micronational Community. Because of their Isolation, you can ask a Micronational ruler where the Alwati Sultanate is and they would say "Who?".

Border guard

The Alwati border guard consists of the entire Alwati Army when it isn't war, and it simply doesn't exist when there is War. Due to this, the Alwatan is basically Allergic to fighting more than one conflict at a time because if the Army is fighting one War, the other enemies would easily be able to enter and take over the Sultanate.

Draft:The Alwati-Norwegian border

Fort Notzeguza

No water?

Border guard

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