Talk:Republic of Arkyn
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Greetings,
I have reviewed the article on the Republic of Arkyn and would like to provide some feedback and suggestions for improvement.
1. Infobox country: The infobox lacks several essential details. Please consider adding information such as the native name, motto, anthem, regional languages, religion, legislature, upper house, lower house, established date, GDP nominal, HDI, UTC offset, ris002code, cctld, and any relevant flags for the predecessors and successors.
2. Grammar and Formatting: There are a few formatting and grammatical issues throughout the article. Please ensure consistency in capitalization, punctuation, and formatting. For instance, the capitalization of "Imperator chumslap" should be standardized.
3. History: The section on history is quite brief and lacks detailed information about the founding and development of the Republic of Arkyn. It would be beneficial to expand this section by providing more context and significant milestones.
4. Law and Order: The statement regarding punishment for law violations should be further clarified. It would be helpful to mention the legal system or the nature of punishments in Arkyn.
5. Foreign Relations: The section on foreign relations mentions ongoing negotiations with other micronations. It would be useful to provide specific details about these negotiations, including the purpose and potential outcomes.
6. Military: While the mention of the Arkyn Military (Arkyn Sentinels) is interesting, it lacks important information such as the size, structure, and objectives of the military. Expanding this section would provide a clearer understanding of the Republic of Arkyn's defense capabilities.
7. External Links: The external links section only includes a URL. It would be more informative to provide a brief description of the content found on the linked webpage.
Overall, the article has the potential to provide a more comprehensive overview of the Republic of Arkyn. I encourage you to address the points mentioned above to enhance the article's quality and readability.
Thank you, --User:King Kevin of Blazdonia (talk) 03:22, 17 May 2023 (UTC)