Talk:Free Territory of Mocrosaïma

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Latest comment: 17 May 2023 by King Kevin of Blazdonia in topic Feedback
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Overall, the article provides some information about the free territory of Mocrosaïma, but there are several issues that need to be addressed for clarity and accuracy. Here are some specific suggestions:

1. Infobox: The infobox is incomplete and lacks important details such as the conventional long name, official languages, government type, and area. Please provide the missing information to make the infobox more informative.

2. Disputed Template: It is unclear why the article is disputed. Please add a section explaining the dispute or remove the disputed template if it is not applicable.

3. Grammar and Spelling: There are several grammar and spelling errors throughout the article. Please proofread and correct them for better readability and accuracy.

4. History Section: The history section needs more specific and verifiable information. For example, it would be helpful to know the dates and circumstances of Mocrosaïma's independence from Spain. Additionally, please provide reliable sources to support the claims made in this section.

5. Etymology Section: The etymology section provides an interesting explanation of the name Mocrosaïma, but it lacks any sources or references. It would be beneficial to include reliable sources that support this etymology.

6. Government Section: The government section mentions the president and prime minister of Mocrosaïma but does not provide any details about the government type or structure. Please expand on this section to provide a clearer understanding of the country's governance.

7. Districts: The list of districts is provided but lacks any information about their significance or characteristics. It would be helpful to include a brief description or notable features of each district.

8. Referencing: The article lacks proper referencing throughout. Please include reliable sources to support the information presented in the article.

Please consider addressing these issues to improve the quality and accuracy of the article. Thank you.

--User:King Kevin of Blazdonia (talk) 03:20, 17 May 2023 (UTC)Reply[reply]